Somewhere out there
Lies thy elsewhere
For thy beauty to pair
Thy miracles to share
Nowhere else but there
A universe lays bare
For you to ensnare
Seek, for thy gem to flare
Somewhere in between
A love for you to preen
Splendor for a life unseen
Save for eyes ever green
Hearts from hate to wean
Majesties for you to glean
Bloating thy soul’s cuisine
Crave no more, precious queen
For dVerse Open
Night
Beautiful!💕 Especially like; "Somewhere in between a love for you to preen splendor for a life unseen save for eyes ever green."💕
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanaa. Happy to have you here and that you enjoyed this.
Deletei like the flaring gem!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteAlwi
You did well with the rhyming! 4 rhymes in a row x 4 verses is challenging, and it still reads well.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteAlwi
This has such a Persian feel to it. Liked it very much.
ReplyDeleteLady Nyo
Would never have guessed to be honest. Thank you for reviewing.
DeleteI love the idea of "thy elsewhere". A beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you kindly Bryan.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteSo nice of you Annell. Thank you.
DeleteI think it's the search that matters more than the finding.
ReplyDeleteAgreed. Thanks for reviewing.
DeleteThe idea of "the elsewhere" is intriguing, and you wrote this beautifully!
ReplyDeleteVery kind of you. Happy that you liked it. If you can't find it here, there's always an elsewhere in waiting!
DeleteI love the rhyming verses and this part is my favorite:
ReplyDeleteFor you to ensnare
Seek, for thy gem to flare
Many thanks Grace. A pleasure to have you here.
DeleteEight monorhymes in a chain, yet the outcome is unforced and the message wonderful. You rocked it, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your generous remarks Collin. Really glad you think I rocked. I'm humbled.
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